The major event in this book is that this little boy went to heaven and back. This was caused because his appendix irrupted. This incident effected his parents also, because if say he were to die then his parents would have to make a funeral and do all this work for it (not saying that they wouldn't want to). It would still effect his parents even if he didn't die, because they would still have him alive and there with them.
This situation effected the little boy because he died and came back to life. I think that this will never leave him because it was a big part that happened in his life. Being the boys parents and all effected them because they had to pay for the bill to have the surgery done. Also it effected his parents because their son is still alive.
I thought your piece was good you could of add the background to all of this like when he came back from heaven was he scared because he didn't know what was happening.
ReplyDeleteYour cause and effect was good but you might want to add a author's note
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