Thursday, February 14, 2013

Sweetness

Author's Note: For my creative piece I decided to write a cinquain poem. As you can see I wrote more than just one poem. I couldn't decide which poem I liked the best, I asked my mom and my sister and they couldn't decide either. I decided to write a poem(s) because poetry is one of my favorite ways to write. 


        Cheesecake
        Heavenly rich
   Eating, tasting, filling 
 Every piece is delicious 
           Dessert 


           Sisters
       Sweet, Mean
Caring, Loving, Fighting
   Love them to death 
           Family


           

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

New Compare and Contrast

Massy-
- Rich
- Snob and stuck up
- Friends, but they are snobs
- Wears fancy clothes



Claire-
- Not a lot of money
- Innocent, sweet and friendly
- Not a lot of friends
- Wears hand-me downs



Both-
- Want to make more friends
- Teenage girls


Monday, February 4, 2013

A Summer Day


In the book Bridges of Madison County the story is told by Francesca, one of the main characters. Today I will be telling the story in the eyes of her kids. This story begins when the son and daughter of Francesca find out that their mother just passed away. It begins with them driving to the home where they grew up in. They go over her will and everything that happens when someone dies. During their mothers story be sure to pay attention to how she finds love for the second time. Love is a strong thing. Even if you meet someone and only know them for four days, you can fall in love with them. 
It was the night that you kids and your father left for the Illinois state fair. I read this from the three journals my mother left us. She wrote them telling us about the time that she was unfaithful to our father, and little helpful things to keep us moving on in life. We were leaving right after we ate and packed. You could tell that my mother was getting excited for us to leave. She was going to have four days all to herself. The sun was just setting when we left. My mother sat on the porch for a couple minutes for some fresh air. After a few minutes of sitting on the porch a car approached the house. My mother is a very brave women, so her first instinct was to stand up and walk to the end of the driveway. A man got out of the car and started walking towards the house. He was just about to speak when my mother quickly said are you lost?
An hour or two had gone by and Robert, the man who was in the truck, and my mother were still talking. She said it felt like they were really getting to know each other, and eventually it got to the point where my mother asked Robert to stay for dinner. "I really liked getting to know Robert," said my mother. He seems to listen to my problems and everything that I had to say. I want you guys to know that I lover your father, I really do! said my mother. As I read on, I started learning things about Robert. I found out things like his last name is Kincaid and that he is a photographer for the National Geographic Magazine. It was getting kind of late and my mother didn't want to just say you have to leave, so she invited him to spend the night on one of the couches. He accepted the offer and took the couch. 
It was the next morning and Robert was still asleep. My mother wanted to give a good second impression. She took a quick shower, and made some breakfast for them to eat. It only took a couple minutes for Robert to smell the bacon and eggs for him to wake up. We didn't like the fact that this stranger slept on our couch. 
It was the second day that we were gone and he was still at our house. My mother was starting to like him, she said he was nice, sweet and handsome. While we were reading this we were getting kind of upset with our mother. Not the fact that she didn't tell us that she cheated and acted like she was still in love with our father, but the fact that she didn't tell us right away. I guess you could say that she was probably nervous to tell us because she didn't want us to hate her and go and tell our dad. 
For the second day that Robert was there, they took pictures. The only reason that Robert was in Madison County was to get pictures of the old Roseman Bridge for the National Geographic Magazine. It was something new for my mom, her usual life was cooking, cleaning and doing other things for us and the house. My mother described the day to us as one of the most romantic days of her life in a while. 
We were starting to understand why our mother said it was one of the most romantic days in her life. We didn't really do anything for my mother, she was the one who did everything around the house and for us. Occasionally we helped out, but not on a normal basis. 
We kept on reading the diary and it was the third day that we were gone and Robert was at our house. For that day all they really did was relax and get to know each other. They talked and talked and as we read we even learned more about out mother and Robert. The sun was setting and it was getting close to dinner time. Robert asked if he could take a shower before they ate. While Robert showered our mother got dinner ready. My mother said that he came down from his shower and said he was looking pretty good. They were just about to start to eat when a romantic song came on and he asked her to dance. Things were getting intense they were getting close and touching. Eventually he leaned in to kiss her, our mother said she was wanting for him to do that all day. They ended up skipping dinner and just danced and had a great time. 
It was the morning of the day that we were coming home. Our mother wasn't too happy that her romantic weekend was going to end and she was going to go back to cooking and cleaning. Robert left decently early in the morning; he didn't want to take any chances with getting caught being there when we got back. As my mother watched him drive off into the distance she said she was wishing he would turn around and come back. She noted that we got back late afternoon and when we did she was happy to see us. 
We ended up living our lives as we did before she met Robert. She wrote that she thought about him everyday until she passed on. Love is a strong thing, even if you meet someone and only know them for four days, you can fall in love with them. 

Friday, January 18, 2013

Tulsa Shock


Author's Note: Today you are going to be reading a creative piece. I decided to write this because I was inspired by her talent with a basketball. Make sure to pay attention to how they work to get better.
Congratulations Mackenzie Schill, you have just have been accepted to the WNBA, read a sheet of paper from the Tulsa Shock. When she opened this letter she was so happy that she fainted, in other words gravity pulled her down to the ground. When Mackenzie came to, she knew that she was going to really have to work her butt of to play.
It was her first day playing with Tulsa Shock. She felt like she had to use a lot of speed in order to keep up with the other players. They did a lot of drills involving momentum, after a while of those drills they got into shooting. A lot of taller stronger people aren’t as good at shooting as guards, you could tell because the taller people had to force the ball to get the ball to the hoop. Now Mackenzie is a guard so shooting was one of her specialties.
After they worked on their shooting skills, they helped the centers work on their moves. They had little girls guard the big girls so that if they had a mismatch they would have the advantage. The posts also practiced going up against girls that were the same size as each other, so that they could improve their moves and be able to beat anyone under the hoop.
For the next part of the girls practice they worked on acceleration. They had to learn how to speed up and beat their defender down the court. They practiced this by doing suicides. Suicides are sprints running from the baseline to the free-throw line back to the baseline to the half-court line back to the baseline then down to the opposite free-throw line back to the baseline, then to the other baseline and back. This helped with acceleration because you have to work on stopping and then starting up and regaining your speed.
Since the girls were already working so hard, their coach decided to make them push them a little bit harder. The team was pretty fast with their feet, but their coach wanted to make them even better. She wanted to make them do defensive slides, which are where you slide from one lane line to the other and you go for as long as your coach tells you to. It kills your legs, after you do them for about a minute, your legs start burning. I can relate, since I have had to do them a lot in my career.
The coach finally decided to lighten up on the girls since they were working really hard. Their coach wanted them to do free-throws while their legs were tired, so it would prepare them for tough games. After shooting about 20 free-throws each practice was over. Mackenzie knew that she was going to have to work her butt off for the rest of the season, seeing as this was her first practice. She knew that it would get harder as the season went on. 

Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Compare and Contrast

Colton

-          Not a bad kid
      Has parents
-          Lives in a house with family
-          Good friends


Roger

-         Troubled child
-          No parents
-          Lives on the street by himself.
      No friends 
-        
       
      Both  
      Both at a young age. 
-         Both have problems in their life, right now.
      Both scared because of their situation. 

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Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Death and Tragedy


Author's Note:  I decided to write about Charlie St. Cloud  because I thought it would be a good book to write a theme essay on. Make sure to pay attention to the main theme in this book. 

Sadness is something that most people have in their life. In the book Charlie St. Cloud sadness is something that happens to the St. Cloud family. Everyone has to deal with sadness once in their life at least. A family member dying, finding out that your someone in your family has cancer, or worst of all one of your siblings or parents dying. In Charlie St. Cloud Sam, one of the main characters dies, therefore making a tragedy strike in the St. Cloud family. 

If someone close to you dies, you got to be brave and fight through it. Charlie St. Cloud, Sam's brother, has to do just that. Sam was one of Charlie's best friends, I can feel Charlie's pain. I lost my grandpa, he was really close to me; we would always make jokes. When he died, I knew I had to be brave and not let the fact that one of my best friends was gone. I knew that he was in a better place though. 

A lot of people just feel like giving up on their lives when someone important dies in their life. I can say that I was more like Charlie in this case because I was brave and was only upset about his death for 2 or 3 days. Charlie in this case was brave but, he could still be with his brother. In the book it says that Charlie would meet Sam in the woods around sunrise to help him get better with his baseball throwing. When Sam dies, he doesn't fully leave Charlie's presents. During the funeral for Sam, Charlie decides to run away to the spot where he swore he would meet him. When running through the woods Charlie tripped and fell, when he looked up he saw Sam. You could tell that Charlie was shocked to see him standing there in front of him. Sam looked at him and said you 
didn't forget about our deal did you? From then on Sam and Charlie met there until Charlie met a girl. Of course the guy choose the girl over a guy. My point that I am trying to make is that you got to be brave because even when people pass on, they will always be with you, if you can see them or if they are just watching over you. 

If you think about it, Charlie St. Cloud  and The Last Song are similar in ways. For instance in Charlie St. Cloud Charlie's little brother dies, in The Last Song Ronny; the main character, her father dies yet she is brave and fights on with her life. Both books have a death occur in them, also in both of the books the main characters both get involved in a relationship. A lot of things can happen in books that are the same in other books. 

In conclusion I think that there can be many themes in a book, but the main theme in Charlie St. Cloud is bravery and courage. The reason I think that bravery is the main theme is because that happens a lot in the book. I guarantee that there are more than one theme in every book, but there is one dominate theme. 

Thursday, November 29, 2012

A New Ending


Author's Note: I chose this as my predicting piece because I thought it was pretty well detailed. Also because I liked this story a lot, and thought that I would bring this story back up.

When he made his way out into the world, he had just realized that the women who he had tried to steel her purse, just gave him 10 bucks. He was deciding what to do with the 10 dollars he had just gotten. He wanted to get the suede shoes he wanted, but when he realized that Mrs. Jones just changed his point of view on life, on people. As the days went by Roger thought about the 10 dollars more and more, he kept wondering why she had given him the ten bucks. Was it because she felt bad for me? Was it because she didn't want me to get in any more trouble? Or was it because she wanted him to be a successful. We will never know for sure.

He felt bad for taking the 10 dollars from the women, he wanted to repay her by getting her gift. He decided to go to the store and get her a bracelet. It was maybe 3 weeks later when he finally returned the favor. He walked up to her house, knocked on the door and when she opened it he said hi, remember me? She replied with a faint answer of yes. Well if you remember the time when you gave me the 10 dollars, this is to repay you for this. She asked why are you giving me this bracelet? His response was you changed my point of view on life, and you have changed my life, I am not steeling anything anymore. This is just my way of saying thank you. He started walking away, as he was, Mrs. Jones just kept staring at him. And they never saw each other again.